Friday, October 28, 2016
News Observations
On October 22, 2016 at Steak ‘n’ Shake 2380 Sycamore Rd. DeKalb Illinois around 2:14 pm. A man appeared to be in his late 30s wearing a green shirt with black pants losing a profound amount of hair, sitting alone watching two college girls around the ages of mid 20s short with blonde hair, for more than a hour. The reason why this man was watching them are unknown. When you are out in public make sure you check your surroundings for anything unusual.
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ReplyDeleteIn the passage you told the reader what you saw and observed but I think that you discribed the man a little to much. You could of just said that he was a man in his late 30s and that he was losing a lot of hair. Also maybe people don't know how the restaurant looks like so you can describe how the inside and outside looks like.
ReplyDeleteAlso explain that way he was looking at the girls like was he smiling and did he look mad. Also explain the environment was is raining or was it sunny cold or warm. Over all I think you did a great job but after the advise I think next time you can do much better.